Thursday, November 7, 2019

LAGOS POTHOLES FEARS






Potholes, the nightmare of every human

If cars could speak, inhuman would be their cry


The Lagos Potholes fears

Like a beer parlour endears people to drinks

The potholes endear cars to the workshop.


Potholes stay fruitful with offspring

The fruits of raindrops turned ugly

Multiply by more vehicular ply

Try a count, a headache mount


                                         
Like a pot in the kitchen to cook your favourite meal

The holes on the roads book your appointment for a mechanic deal

To have your shocks heal'


But with every mechanic visit

Their cry, we feel through the fly of funds

For their repairs from our wallet


Then, with every unfamiliar road passed

The potholes stand tall in our memory



The visit to the mechanic short-lived

But unforgotten by dent in finances


A ten minute drive through Lagos with no potholes

Might be a fear to fight when found out of Lagos

Never a dream

But a reality with plight on location


Earliness, a basis for lateness

Appointments turn' disappointments

Traffic, a drain from productivity



Energy lost in road discomfort



Potholes dodge



The skill to car shocks survival 

With caution, the vehicle surpasses expectation

But like a network,

Reception for more potholes stay the attraction



With lost hours for a handful minutes journey

Lost opportunities come lost money

Impurities to national growth, never funny

The future stays epic but bleak by myopic governance




Expeditiously we are acclaimed the city of excellence

But with resilience on the roads, comes crimed violence

Now, a wake-up call never to fall

But stand tall over the wall

Our growth, never cowed by granted problems


THE END

Words through the mind of Taiwo, Kehinde Oluwaseyi


19 comments:

  1. We no longer have potholes in lagos..but pitholes����..I love your poem .keep it up

    From victinder.

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  2. I can't disagree with you, the pain here is the discouragement these serves to business...
    Lagos is 'more than this'

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  3. Nice poem... Thoughtfully put together, on the issue, from what I hear... It's truly become a Nightmare! Hoping for huge improvements as the new LASG Administration finds it's feet... Maybe after one pothole!

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    1. I deduce you are definitely not in Lagos but I am glad the words have got you depicting it clearly.

      Thanks for your comment

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  4. This is brilliant, this is the predicament we find ourselves in as a lagosians.. What a sad situation

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    1. Thanks Wunmi, well said.

      Once upon a time we cried for reguaor power supply... Though far from granted, now we crying for roads

      The situation is beyond sad

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  5. Nicely written Twinnie. You just spoke the minds of Lagos-road users. I hope the people in authority get to see this and act accordingly by fixing the "time-wasters" and "death-traps" we call roads in Lagos. Well done!

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    1. I swear! Wasted productive hours in Lagos traffic.

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    2. Thanks 'egbon twinnie'. Surely, the roads are necessary for urgent attention.

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  6. Hmm, nice write up. These potholes are one of the most challenging problems encountered on the road. So sad!

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  7. Nice ones. Haven’t felt so poetic around portholes before😂. But I love the abstract nature of the poem. Looking forward for more

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    1. I love the humour behind your review. Thanks a lot, surely dropping one soon on Danfo buses.

      Cheers

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