Potholes, the
nightmare of every human
If cars could
speak, inhuman would be their cry
The Lagos
Potholes fears
Like a beer
parlour endears people to drinks
The potholes
endear cars to the workshop.
Potholes stay
fruitful with offspring
The fruits of
raindrops turned ugly
Multiply by more
vehicular ply
Try a count, a
headache mount
Like a pot in the
kitchen to cook your favourite meal
The holes on the
roads book your appointment for a mechanic deal
To have your
shocks heal'
But with every
mechanic visit
Their cry, we
feel through the fly of funds
For their repairs
from our wallet
Then, with every
unfamiliar road passed
The potholes
stand tall in our memory
The visit to the
mechanic short-lived
But unforgotten
by dent in finances
A ten minute
drive through Lagos with no potholes
Might be a fear
to fight when found out of Lagos
Never a dream
But a reality
with plight on location
Earliness, a
basis for lateness
Appointments
turn' disappointments
Traffic, a drain
from productivity
Energy lost in
road discomfort
Potholes dodge
The skill to car
shocks survival
With caution, the
vehicle surpasses expectation
But like a
network,
Reception for
more potholes stay the attraction
With lost
hours for a handful minutes journey
Lost
opportunities come lost money
Impurities to
national growth, never funny
The future stays
epic but bleak by myopic governance
Expeditiously we are acclaimed the city of excellence
But with resilience on the roads, comes crimed violence
Now, a wake-up
call never to fall
But stand tall
over the wall
Our growth, never
cowed by granted problems
THE END
Words through the mind of Taiwo, Kehinde Oluwaseyi
Nice poem .
ReplyDeleteThanks for your thoughts.
ReplyDeleteWe no longer have potholes in lagos..but pitholes����..I love your poem .keep it up
ReplyDeleteFrom victinder.
I can't disagree with you, the pain here is the discouragement these serves to business...
ReplyDeleteLagos is 'more than this'
Nice poem... Thoughtfully put together, on the issue, from what I hear... It's truly become a Nightmare! Hoping for huge improvements as the new LASG Administration finds it's feet... Maybe after one pothole!
ReplyDeleteI deduce you are definitely not in Lagos but I am glad the words have got you depicting it clearly.
DeleteThanks for your comment
This is brilliant, this is the predicament we find ourselves in as a lagosians.. What a sad situation
ReplyDeleteThanks Wunmi, well said.
DeleteOnce upon a time we cried for reguaor power supply... Though far from granted, now we crying for roads
The situation is beyond sad
Nicely written Twinnie. You just spoke the minds of Lagos-road users. I hope the people in authority get to see this and act accordingly by fixing the "time-wasters" and "death-traps" we call roads in Lagos. Well done!
ReplyDeleteI swear! Wasted productive hours in Lagos traffic.
DeleteThanks 'egbon twinnie'. Surely, the roads are necessary for urgent attention.
DeleteNice!!
ReplyDeleteThanks a bunch Anita
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ReplyDeleteThank you very much... well appreciated
DeleteHmm, nice write up. These potholes are one of the most challenging problems encountered on the road. So sad!
ReplyDeleteYou can say that again, really unfortunate
DeleteNice ones. Haven’t felt so poetic around portholes before😂. But I love the abstract nature of the poem. Looking forward for more
ReplyDeleteI love the humour behind your review. Thanks a lot, surely dropping one soon on Danfo buses.
DeleteCheers